I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia ora Tama my name is Pharell and I go to Paihia School and I'm a year 6 student. I really enjoyed reading your blog post about the The fastest and loudest animals. I really liked it because it had lots of interesting facts. I liked when you said the smelliest animal is gorrilla . Last year I did a similar post but I did one about the sea. Did you take long to find all of your facts? Keep up the great work
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Kia ora Tama my name is Pharell and I go to Paihia School and I'm a year 6 student. I really enjoyed reading your blog post about the The fastest and loudest animals. I really liked it because it had lots of interesting facts. I liked when you said the smelliest animal is gorrilla . Last year I did a similar post but I did one about the sea. Did you take long to find all of your facts? Keep up the great work
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