Wednesday, 5 August 2020

15 minte writeng

once upon a time there was a boy called jack.Jack liked makeing his ww2 moldel aircraft moldels.
Jack said my fvroute lane from ww is the supermarine spitfire.Jack explained the spitfire was the most well
known plane in the  battle of britain. The spitfire's enimany  was the messerschmitt Bf 109.The 
messerschmitt Bf 109 fighting in air with the spitfire back in 1940 when it was the battle britain.

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  1. Anonymous18 August 2020 at 14:39

    Kia ora Tama my name is Dalton and i'm a year 8 at Paihia School. I am commenting on your post about 15 minute writing I really think you did a good job and I like how you have used really strong words. I really think you have made heaps of progress, I really think it is a good piece of writing keep up the good work. Was 15 minutes enough time?

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. 
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Helpful - please give me some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about.

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